Thursday, October 29, 2015

TDG 201: Cloud Dream World (1/2)

Does Nie Li seem like someone who needs a patron? Yu Yan understood that Nie Li was just joking, because between the both of them, the dominant figure is definitely not her. It is she who is being helped by Nie Li! Simply based on the fact that Nie Li could comprehend two types of Code powers show that within the next few months, his training will advance at a startling speed. Perhaps he will even reach Legendary Rank very quickly.

"I will still return today's favor. What do we need to do next to hide my presence and leave this place?" asks Yu Yan as she looks at Nie Li. She can now move her body naturally, and the surrounding Fire Code energy has also been almost completely absorbed by her.

Just as Nie Li said, she would need to travel in order to absorb more energy of the Code of the Fire to revert to her peak condition.

"To leave this place Elder Sister Goddess, you will need to follow my plan," Nie Li said with a smile, "Otherwise, your presence will be felt, and I will be in trouble!"

"I understand, the Demon Beast race has a strong person who wield a Code power. I must hide my presence, otherwise there is only death at the end of this road. As long as your plan is good, I will follow you." Yu Yan nodded. To recover her strength, she will have to be inconvenienced for the greater good.

"I will cover your body in inscriptions from the Code of Darkness, and thus hide your presence. Elder Sister Goddess will need to be inconvenienced, please shrink your physical body as much as possible. I will need to hide you in my sleeve. Apart from that, you will need to place your clothes, and anything you have used into a pile. Then, use the energy from your Code of Fire to create an inscription Technique to emulate your presence. Those spirit beasts will think that you are still bound within here. I will show you how to craft the inscription Technique." Nie Li replied.

Yu Yan nods as she understood Nie Li's plans.

Yu Yu started getting busy, her tiny body flying non-stop. Although her size is small, but her speed and efficiency is considerably high.

Within the center of Yu Yan's inscription technique, the shadow of a figure slowly formed, and quietly stood up. This figure looked exactly like Yu Yan. Of course, this is just an illusion.

After everything was put into place, Nie Li looked towards Yu Yan, "Yu Yan, try becoming as small as possible."

Yu Yan glanced at Nie Li's sleeves, and couldn't help but feel awkward. Even if she could shrink herself to 1 "chi", the space within Nie Li's sleeves would still be too tight. However, she didn't have any other choice, and could only go with this method.

For the future of the Human Race, she must not worry about small issues like this. Her figure slowly shrunk to 1 "chi", transformed into a ray of light, and entered Nie Li's sleeve.

The space within Nie Li's sleeve was really too tight, Yu Yan filled up the entire sleeve to the point where even small movements were extremely difficult. Yu Yan uncomfortably twisted her body. Nie Li's arm was like a giant pole that blocked her view. Her body could only stick tightly to his arm.

"Elder Sister Goddess, don't simply move!" Nie Li smiled with difficulty. The sleeve was truly quite tight, but they really had no choice, because he was only able to exert a stable control over the Darkness Code's power near his palm.

Nie Li started to urge the power of the the Dark inscription technique. Slowly, dark inscriptions appeared around Yu Yan's body.

Yu Yan could feel that her presence was indeed covered by Nie Li's Dark inscription technique. It never crossed her mind that Nie Li could utilize the Code of Darkness in such a well-practiced manner considering he just comprehended it. Within her heart, Yu Yan is now extremely curious as to Nie Li's background.

Nie Li doesn't know Yu Yan's thoughts, all he knows he that an odd sensation is coming from his arm. He could feel the smooth and soft skin, and the shapely figure of Goddess Yu Yan,  it is an enticing excitement. He gave a forced smile, even in his past life, he never went through such an odd situation.

Before entering this place, he was still wondering what treasures were hidden here. Who knows, maybe there were legendary items here. However, he never guessed that this place was hiding a Goddess. He didn't manage to find any treasures, but he managed to bring a Goddess home. Fate is a mysterious thing.

Although the area around the sleeve was quite tight, but from the outside, nothing odd can be felt.

"Let's go." Nie Li says to Yu Yan who is in his sleeve. He then takes the same path back.

After exiting the quiet, dark caves, when they looked down into the ravine below, it appeared bottomless, a completely darkness. According to Goddess Yu Yan, within this ravine, two Legendary Ranked Demon Beasts are hidden, he must be infinitely careful in hiding the presence of Goddess Yu Yan.

As Nie Li was climbing up the cliff, beastial roars would drift up from the ravine below. These intimidating roars were probably from enormous demon beasts. It made one's heart pound. Luckily, these beasts were hiding within the ravine, if they appeared, based on Nie Li's currently capabilities, he truly isn't their match.

At this moment, even Goddess Yu Yan started becoming extremely careful, and tried her absolute best to withdraw her presence.

Nie Li very quickly climbed to the top of the cliff. He brushed off the dirt on his person. Although it was dangerous to enter the dark spring, the rewards this time are still quite handsome. He starts walking towards the Sky's Fate Tribe. At first, Nie Li thought that he would be able to find the treasure within the dark spring in a day, however, he never thought that he would meet Yu Yan there and delay his plans by so much.

Sky's Fate Tribe. Xiao Huang and his companions waited a long time for Nie Li to return. They thought that Nie Li passed away within the dark spring, so they returned to their tribe.

When Xiao Wu heard that Nie Li never came back, he felt helpless. Nie Li died within the dark spring. If the Mayor of Glory City finds out, would they destroy Sky's Fate Tribe?


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Note:

Frankly, I think Glory City should be renamed Radiance City. In Mandarin, it can be either meaning. However, I feel that the city's goal is not glory but rather to be a light for the Human Race in darkness. A hope. I will stick to Glory City for now though... just to make it easier for readers.


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28 comments:

  1. Q: Do you know that there is already a translator that is translating this novel?

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  2. yeah and on chap 200?

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  3. You do realize your translating 100 chapters ahead of the story thats been translated so far.

    Also I recommend pick up a new series that hasn't been translated or one that was dropped. Instead of a series that already has a translator pushing out a chapter nearly every day.

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  4. This series already has a translator and since you started at 200 im sure you know that which makes you seem like a much bigger douche. Poaching this project after it got popular from the translator who has been doing the project since the beginning is a disgusting thing to do. You are an opportunistic douche trying to make a quick buck after letting the initial translator do the early heavy lifting so the project could become popular. It would be one thing if releases were once every 3 months or once every 6 months but thyaeria is a good translator that works at a great speed and always keeps readers informed if he is slowing down, speeding up, or taking a break.

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    1. You're ridiculous. Don't impose your irrational, idiotic thinking onto others. If she enjoys translating leave her be. I welcome her addition. Her translations are better and they aren't motivated by money. She's the best type of translator: someone who actually knows English and who doesn't do it for money. How dare you discourage someone from doing what they enjoy. You should feel ashamed.

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    2. Thjen couldn't she started from the start? at least we wont need to wait 100 day to be able to read her translations....

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  5. http://thyaeriatranslations.com/

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  6. Guys, chill. I'm pretty sure Star'sWish only wants to translate for fun. He/she's not like that asshole crackdealer who was flat out selling ATG chapters to poach the translation from Alyschu's group and slandering them. Hell, starwish went 100 chapters ahead, this isn't paid/poaching at all.

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    1. Think of it more as spoilers for TDG or mtl.

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  7. not blaming you though, but some people are like that. Though I could tell you weren't like that, since u started 200, I mean, who starts on chap 200 right away?

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    1. Who starts on Chap 200 right away? Someone who wants to, obviously. Does it matter? No. Should you care? No. Are you forced to click on this? No. So why are you commenting on this thread when this doesn't apply to you in any way? Great question, and one that I've yet to figure out.

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  8. Maybe he just using it as advertising. ....make ppl aware of the site

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  9. Please consider Thyaerias feelings as the one who started translation and is doing a wonderful job. I consider it a case of manners to leave it to the active translater. If you want to contribute, speak with Thyaeria.

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  10. I still hope you can speak with Thyaeria and think something out cuz even translating 89 chapters ahead is still translating another translator's project

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    1. Its a project bro its not like you can still fan based work. This guy is good give him more face. He isn't a thief but a fan doing something for free

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  11. I agree with your interpretation of the city name. And if this is your first attempt at translation, then it's not too shabby.

    On a side note, I agree with most of the other comments that you should double check with the other translator of the series. Not that I think you shouldn't be able to translate it. It's not like Thyaeria owns the work or anything. But it would be a lot better if translators could work together for faster releases.

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  12. Ignore some of the immature comments here.

    But you really need to get in contact with Thyaeria, just in case.

    The drama ain't worth it. Better to have a good understanding with the other translator.

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  13. Stupidity at its finest!

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    1. You're just pissed you couldn't read from were you left off is it stupid that he can speak to languages or translates something popular for us. Is it stupid that not just one person should have a monopoly on something?

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    2. Ass kisser use your head.. think what if thyaeria will remove his translations and stop like what happened in ST before? Since this was started at chapther 200 basically he knows that someone is already translating it.

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    3. That's irrational thinking that you're promoting. If you encourage someone to use their head, you should use your own, too. Just because something happened in the past does not mean it will happen in the future. That is the epitome of illogical thought. If you don't like it, don't click on it. No one is forcing you. Thyaeria will continue translating as long as people continue donating. If you're worried about it, start donating, and take your negativity away from this site. I love that Star's Wish doesn't do this for money. That's honorable.

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  14. Can the city's name be translated to Radiant City instead of Radiance City? I don't even know the basic of chinese but it just sounds better that way in english.

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    1. Yes it can :) And I do agree that Radiant City sounds so much better. I sometimes loose sight of what sounds better in English whenever translating from Chinese. It is a fine line between staying faithful to the Chinese meaning and elegance in the English language.

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  15. Your work is good and I applaud doing translation. I think you should pick another project or work with thy. Sheng wang is about the same level interesting and the translators do 1 chapter a month so 12 a year although right now there's only 6 chapters done, so it's not gained enough of a following to regarded poaching.
    Here is the link
    http://book.zongheng.com/showchapter/158432.html

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    1. I agree with you. Thats a bood novel to continue

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  16. Your epic youre translation is flawless please keep at it no matter what project you do I'll be a fan ��

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  17. Don't be discouraged by the people here who misunderstood your work, just do what you think is fun! That's what's important! :)

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  18. Well I have just been reading the Raws and just using a machine translator ,so enjoy what you do :) You helped clarify some of the story I didn't understand so ,Thank you :D

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